I love you, I love your writing and I love this pairing. Characterisation is great -- Ray taking control, Bob shrugging off his problems, Brian the mother hen, smart-arse Frank. And Patrick! I wondered if he would show up. And what a great approach for a Paramour fic (haha I nearly wrote Paramore); the Way brothers' drama is an undercurrent rather than the focus. Never stop writing, my dear. :)
My favourite part? The stealth kiss in the hallway. ♥
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Date: 2008-07-09 10:07 am (UTC)My favourite part? The stealth kiss in the hallway. ♥